Sakura Senti*

[Sakura Senti]

Sakura Senti


You haven't seen anything yet!

Take a bite of my heart tonight.[/color][/b]

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Nickname: Sakura
Age: Sixteen.
Birthdate: October 10
Nation of Origin: Earth Nation.
Gender: Female.[/ul][/size]

Just like all those pretty lights in the sky. [/b][/color]

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Eyes: Brown, Almond Shaped.
Height: 5'6
Weight: 105
Bender/non-bender: Bender.
Element for Benders: Earth.
Special Techniques: Basic Earthbending techniques.
Physical Description:Sakura is tan and dainty. She may look small and cute but she is a very strong fighter. She is medium height, and skinny. She has long dark hair, and small blue eyes. She has white perfect teeth, and small lips. She is very quiet, and even though she has perfect sight, she prefers to rely on her hearing for most tasks.

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We'll be a dream. [/size]

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Dislikes:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

Overall Personality:

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"I'm reacting to your touch."[/size]

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Siblings: Only Child.
Significant other: Single.
Children: No Children.
Current Home: Lives with parents. Fairly large house.
History:

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[Kenji Ishihara]

you need to make sure you add ALOT more to your history please. other then that it looks fine. If you do, your app will look much better

[Admin Akiko]

Oh and add another weakness.

[Chiemi Yama]

WOAH.... here is my critique. because, well, you know. I wanna help you get a better profile

ONE Don't bold everything on the first two items. Because, frankly, it really confused me. The small text already peeves me (though i love small text, i hate reading it).

TWO Add more to the paragraph required sections. It best if you do add it, try to create the five senses to the history, like describing stuff and everything. For the overall description, try to get descriptive. And for personality, try to get into what shapes how she acts and how people think of her personality.

THREE Basic Earth Techniques are not Special Techniques. If you don't have any, just say so.

FOUR Make your character believable. Have some character flaws.



Apart from that, your application is really good.

[Admin Akiko]

This has been moved to the character graveyard due to you not making the required changes in five days. PM one of the staff if you would like to have it reopened.